We (Georgina, Pete and myself) went to see Mack and Mabel last night in Frome, and in particular to see the revised script. And I'll be honest I'm still seeing the same problems in the revised script - bits are confusing, still has the same sudden ending and there's no real natural progressing of the main relationship. Plus some of the changes actually make the flow worse. But hey, I'm up for a challenge and think we can turn it around.
Neil
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